I'm a little computer incompetent for things that aren't related to Microsoft, so I just put my IOC on my google drive and hopefully you'll have access to it because here's the link: Shaunaci's IOC (just download it and it should work...I promise it's not a virus.) I also shared it with you, Mrs. Genesky. I can also share it with you, random person reading this, but you have to shed your anonymity and ask for it first.
My passage was from Never Let Me Go
Here's my beautiful planning:
Literally I always love my planning. I think I'm a pretty adequate planner, I just tend to not articulate my amazing ideas well. I am in no way an expert on the IOC, but I found it helpful when I was planning to use the numbering system, and then over to the side write out the themes for those numbers, so that way when I am jumbling my words and completely forget what I'm talking about, at least I can refer back to the main concept I was trying to get across. I don't know, it seemed to help me, so maybe it'll help you, too, anonymous reader.
A: 7 I think I did a really good job about referencing back the text to support my argument and using explicit examples to show what I needed to get across.
B: 4 I didn't talk a lot about specific literary devices in the text to help support my claims
C: 3 I think that it is apparent that I tried to organize, and I didn't jump around, but I don't think that my organization flowed very well.
D: 2 I say "um" a lot and I take extremely long, awkward pauses. It was kind of uncomfortable.
My passage was from Never Let Me Go
Here's my beautiful planning:
Literally I always love my planning. I think I'm a pretty adequate planner, I just tend to not articulate my amazing ideas well. I am in no way an expert on the IOC, but I found it helpful when I was planning to use the numbering system, and then over to the side write out the themes for those numbers, so that way when I am jumbling my words and completely forget what I'm talking about, at least I can refer back to the main concept I was trying to get across. I don't know, it seemed to help me, so maybe it'll help you, too, anonymous reader.
A: 7 I think I did a really good job about referencing back the text to support my argument and using explicit examples to show what I needed to get across.
B: 4 I didn't talk a lot about specific literary devices in the text to help support my claims
C: 3 I think that it is apparent that I tried to organize, and I didn't jump around, but I don't think that my organization flowed very well.
D: 2 I say "um" a lot and I take extremely long, awkward pauses. It was kind of uncomfortable.
